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Post  Squeejee Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:31 pm

General

Side Name: Oz (non-royal)
Ruler Name: Ozzy, "The Prince of Darkness"
Favored Terrain: Tundra
Description: Oz was one of many micro-empires formed from the chaos following Black Sabbath's Chief Warlord Ozzy breaking away from the side. Oz officially started when Ozzy claimed the city of Jet during a great snowstorm many have come to call "The Blizzard of Oz," and since then Oz has grown from Ozzy's solo empire to a formidable side that represents multiple bands. Though Ozzy is called the "Prince of Darkness" by many, a title he earned devouring Doombats, he is not actually royal - just a little out of his mind.
Livery: A white circle on a red background, with the black silhouette of a custom flying V across the circle, the headstock pointing towards the top-right end of the banner.

Oz Army Details

Format:
Name (Type) [Upkeep]
Hits - Combat - Defense - Move
Special Abilities
Fluff.

Infantry
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Specials
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Navy
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Post  Nihila Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:40 pm

Squeejee, it looks like you forgot to add the +10 upkeep for buying Siege for your Archers.

Also, "Fast" is a Complex Special, so A/B Specials can't buy it.

Just so I'm not being a total killjoy here, you only spent 11 out of 12 points for your C-units--Hits increase by 1.5(round down) for every point spent on them.

A similar "problem" occurs with your C-ships (or Galleons, whatever), you spent 15 points on Attack and 2 on Ranged--which leaves you 3 extra points to use.

Edit: Also, despite shortchanging yourself for your C-specials, you also overcharge yourself for them by 10 Schmuckers.


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Post  Squeejee Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:53 pm

Hmm, thanks for double-checking my stuff for me - mistakes are what I get for playing it fast and loose with the math while mostly focusing on the fluff. Seems to look good now, though.

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Post  Nihila Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:03 pm

Well, the fluff was good. My fluff was mostly my min-max Pokemon player talking, yours was awesome.

I love the fact that the Stage Manager is the most powerful Infantry unit for your side, because I know a few (under-appreciated) Stage Managers.
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Post  Squeejee Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:05 pm

Hah! I've been one, actually - never enough appreciation to go around :D

For the record, you can also expect HBO jokes and Wizard jokes abound once things get underway.

EDIT: Am I the only one who finds smileys annoying enough to disable them on my posts? Because I really do find them really, really annoying.

EDIT2: Fixed a few spelling errors in my first post.

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